Writing Tip: Use Active Verbs

Active verbs DO something. Inactive verbs ARE something.

Bad: The grandfather clock was in one corner, and three books were on top of it.

Better: The grandfather clock towered in one corner, and three books lay on top of it.

Taken from “100 Ways To Improve Your Writing” by Gary Provost ISBN 978-0-451-62721-6

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